ext_272835 ([identity profile] sgcharbor.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] todokanu 2011-06-06 07:37 am (UTC)

this is really so so good. i'm not gonna bore you by re-quoting the fic and everyone has declared their undying love for you so, /jumps aboard the lovewagon

i love your plot development and subtlety. i love the way you write without giving away the story, like how zhou mi is actually next-in-line for Revenge. it was a pleasant surprise and pieces of the puzzle are starting to fall into place. i also love your character portrayal. this fic is just so good.

oh, and you made me cry too, and I don't cry easily at all >_>;;

"Oh," he said softly, tension suddenly draining out of his body.

my heart plummeted.

"It looks like you got your wish after all."

dem waterworks. i didn't even feel the tears welling.

/sighs

good job babe on the too-awesome fic

/mems and prints

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