THERE ARE SO MANY PLACES I WOULD'VE WORDED DIFFERENTLY i just got too tired to actually edit the second 2/3rd of this!?!?
but ahhhhhhhhhhhhh my stumbling block has always been characters and story (apparently it was like looking at it through a glass) and my saving grace has been my writing so this is kind of amazing that I did okay in that department.
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Date: 2011-06-05 06:43 pm (UTC)THERE ARE SO MANY PLACES I WOULD'VE WORDED DIFFERENTLY i just got too tired to actually edit the second 2/3rd of this!?!?
but ahhhhhhhhhhhhh my stumbling block has always been characters and story (apparently it was like looking at it through a glass) and my saving grace has been my writing so this is kind of amazing that I did okay in that department.